A Renewed Life

Sorry this is soooo long, but I decided to post the whole story at once instead of in several parts.  If anyone is having trouble loading or reading it, let me know, and I can re-post in several installments...

Carmita looked around the tiny room.  It was not much, she thought, but it was cleans, and besides, their guest wouldn’t be expecting much more.  Carmita closed the door on the room carefully, so as not to stir up any dust.  The plainness of the guest room was mirrored with the rest of the house.  Bare walls, mere holes for windows, a cooking fire and a table with a few chairs were the only things in the room.  The simple cupboard had gone only last year to pay the taxes.  Carmita moved slowly and heavily to the fire.  It had gone out, but she had no energy just then to relight it.  Grabbing a dipper she headed outside to where the water bucket lay in the shade.  She dipped out a drink, allowing the warm water to run slowly down her throat.  It felt refreshing despite the luke-warm temperature.  Carmita pushed the loose curls of hair away from her face, wishing a cool breeze would come and cool her forehead – but none came. 
            She glanced down the road. He mother, Anamari, the expected guest, would be arriving soon.  Normally, at times of childbirth, the mother-in-law was the in the hoe, ready to help out.  But Carmita’s parents-in-law had died several years ago, and she and Tali had sole ownership of the house.  Anamari had been more than willing to take the mother’s spot in the household as the time drew nearer. 
            But there was no sight of her yet, and Carmita turned back, out of the sun and into the relative shade of the house. 
            Anamari didn’t arrive until long after the heat of the day had passed.  She was travelling alone, having left husband, sons and daughters-in-law at home, tilling the soil, preparing for harvest.
            Carmita rushed out to meet her mother.  Anamari held her tight, whispering words of love and receiving the words of generous welcome.  Then they turned and sauntered slowly into the hose.
            “’Tis a grand house you’ve got her,” Anamari said.  Carmita looked around at the bare room – small and simple.  But the walls were strong and the dirt was packed hard enough that it swept clean.
            “Aye,” she agreed, “The walls are strong and have been ever since they were built - when Tali was little.”
            Anamari touched the wall with her hand, feeling the solidly packed clay and mud, “They are much better than your old home,” she said, “I had to patch the walls again only last week.  It is good to have such a strong place to raise your family.”
            Carmita flushed slightly, but nodded her head in agreement, “Do sit down mother,” she invited, gesturing to a chair.  Anamari took the offered seat, fanning her face with her hand, “It is a very hot day,” she commented, accepting the dipper of water Carmita handed to her.  After her thirst was satisfied, Carmita settled herself with a sigh that indicated sh didn’t want to move for some time.
            “Tell me all about my family,” she begged, “How are they all doing?”
            Anamari smiled, settling herself on the chair, read for as long a chat as possible, “they are all fine, my dear,” she answered, “You brother’s children are growing up so fast, and I suspect there manu be another one the way,” she leant forward in a conspiratorial way, “But don’t tell anyone because I don’t know for sure myself yet.”
            Carmita assured her that she wouldn’t, and then Anamari continued, “Tis your father I worry about.  His is not getting any younger, you know, and often he is ill.  I try to persuade him to take it easy now that your brothers are working fulltime, but he refuses.  Refuses to be useless, I believe, but he’ll work himself down to his grave.”
            Carmita nodded in agreement, but said nothing.  After all, how much more was there to say?  She didn’t belong there anymore; they were not her immediate family.  They were special to her, of course, but her household took all of her attention.
            “And how about you?” Anamari asked, “Tell me how you have been.”
            Carmita shook her head slightly to clear it of her current train of thought and answered, “We have been well. The harvest is coming in nicely and strong and Tali is hoping for enough to sell and save some coins after taxes.  It is proving to be a good year.”
            “And yourself,” prompted Anamari again.
            “I have been as well as can be expected,” Carmita flushed again, but the deep tan of her cheeks didn’t reveal the fact, “Just tired.  And ready.”
            “Yes, the last weeks are the longest,” Anamari agreed, “But definitely worth it.”
            Carmita smiled in answer, but her attention was taken by a sound in the yard. “That sounds like Tali,” she said, “But it is way too early for him to be home.”
            She rose to her feet, and moved to stand behind the window, where she could see without being seen.
            “It is Tali!” she exclaimed, “He’s walking, so nothing appears to be wrong.  Oh I hope everything is alright.”
            Tali opened the door and walked through, his big frame suddenly making the empty room feel crowded.  He nodded a greeting at his wife and her mother.
            “I heard that you had arrived, Mother,” he said in explanations, “And thought I would take a quick trip in to say hello.  I have to go back in a minute.”
            “Why, that was thoughtful,” Anamari replied, rising to greet her son-in-law, “I trust you are well.”
            “Never better,” Tali said, “Thankyou,” as Carmita handed him the dipper of water.  He drained it in a moment and handed the dipper back to Carmita.
            “Thankyou,” he said again, “Well, I had best be going.  Glad to see you are in good health.”
            “Selah.”
            The two women settled back down after Tali left.  “He’s such a gentleman,” Anamari mused, “Tis a good man you have got yourself Carmita.” 
            Carmita smiled, her thoughts summing up her husband.  Strong, large and determined, but very kind, thoughtful and gentle.  Just like a gentle giant.  She suddenly realised Anamari had said something to her.  She pulled her attention back and replied, “Sorry, I didn’t hear that.  What did you say?”
            Anamari made a negative gesture with her hand, “Just commenting on the good weather for the crops.”
            Carmita nodded, “We have had a good amount of rain when we needed it, and although it is terribly hot and dry now, it is perfect for drying the oats.”
            “It’s looking like a good harvest.”
            “Yes – I haven’t been up the past few day, but last I looked, it appeared to be going well.  How is yours?’
            “Oh, average I guess.  Our climate hasn’t been as perfect for the oats as yours.  We got the rain a few weeks late, so our oats aren’t ready to harvest yet.  However the olive groves are doing well.  They thrive on the later rain.  So I supposed you can’t have both – but one or the other, it’s good enough.”
            Carmita nodded.  She remembered the year when they picked olives, and the years they harvested oats – but never could she remember a year when they had a good crop of both.
            The sun sunk lower in the west as the two women chatted on.  Suddenly, Carmita realise how dark it was getting and leapt up to light the fire.
            “Tali will be home soon,” she scolded herself “and there is not even a fire lit.”
            “Never worry,” Anamari said, rising to come to her aid, “I’ll help you out and we’ll get it done in no time at all.”
            Carmita nodded her appreciation.  She turned and patted the resting bread dough placing onto the baking paddle which she then lowered cautiously into the fire.  It hissed somewhat before settling down to bake.
            Anamari look on, impressed. “That’s a new way to bake your flat bread, is it not?”
Carmita nodded, “Tali’s mother gave it to us when we were first married.  It is made of iron, and although heavy, beaks bread quicker than anything else I’ve seen so far.”
“Iron,” Anamari repeated thoughtfully, “Doesn’t the handle get really hot?”
“Yes, but I just use a rag.  It works alright.”  While they were talking, Carmita had been cutting up a few solitary vegetable, and Anamari had been trying top hack a corner of the slab of salted beef that hung from the ceiling in the corner. 
“The time just before the harvest is always the hardest,” Carmita commented, glancing into the pot which was not half full.
“Indeed, Anamari nodded, “The preserves and pickles have been used, the savings are just about depleted and the garden is not quite ready to be harvested.  It is a lean time indeed.” 
Carmita ladled several dipper fulls of water into the pot and Anamari slipped the diced beef in.  Then she moved to hang the pot over the fireplace to cook. 
But to her surprise, Carmita gestured for her to wait.  Carmita went outside to a small hole dug behind the house, covered with a cloth soaked in water in an attempt to keep perishable goods.  She carefully lifted out an identical pot.
Carmita walked slowly back to the house.  When Anamari saw the pot, she lifted an eyebrow, an unspoken question.
“It’s yesterday’s stew,” Carmita explained, “stew takes too long to cook every meal, so I make extra, then save some for the next meal.  And while we eat, the next lot cooks on the fire.”
“Very clever,” Anamari replied, “I wondered why yo put the bread on and then began to cut up the stew.”
Carmita only smiled, and strained to lift the pot over the stove.  She settled it down with a small grunt.  “I am looking forward to being able to life and move things with east again,” she commented.
            “You shouldn’t be doing much lifting at all,” Anamari scolded, “And now that I am here, be assured that you won’t be.”
            Carmita once again only smiled.  She was glad for the help even though she would have died before admitting it.
            “And now, Anamari said, pushing her point, “You sit down and I’ll set the table.”
            Carmita didn’t argue, but sank gratefully down on the chair, and expressed her thanks.
            Tali came home a few minutes later. “I see she had put you to work already mother,” he teased.  Both women were about to protest, then saw the teasing glint in his eyes and decided to ignore it and let the comment pass. 
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The next morning, Tali announced at breakfast that be believed the crop was nearly ripe and ready for harvest.
            “It’s so plentiful this year,” he enthused, “And because of the extra heat, it is ready a few days early, and the tax collector won’t be in for another week or so yet.  We can harvest some and store it before they get here.”
            Anamari blinked, “Aren’t you supposed to wait until they count the grain, taking their taxation first?”
            “There will be some left,” Tali reassured her, “But it will only be a poor crop.  You know, early rain, intense heat makes a bad combination for growing Roman crops.”  And he nodded conspiratorially.
            “Oh,” Anamari said, realising what Tali meant.  She frowned, not agreeing with the practise, but not being able to condemn it.  After all, weren’t her own husband and sons also trying to bring in an early harvest?
            Carmita saw the look on Anamari’s face and quickly changed the subject.
            “It looks like it will be another hot day,” she ventured.
            “Just right for harvesting wheat,” Tali put in cheerfully.      
            Carmita rolled her eyes at him, but could think of no reply.  Her attempt to change the subject had failed – failed miserably.
            Anamari chuckled.  Sh had, of course, missed none of the unspoken exchange between the two and was amused by Tali’s deliberate thwarting of his wife’s plan.
            She took up the reins of conversation, and asked, “What do you plan to do today, Carmi?”
            Carmita smiled in recognition of her childhood pet name before answering, “I think I’ll talk it pretty easy today, Mother.  After the general housework and gardening is done, I’d like you to meet my friends in town, if that’s fine with you.”
            “No worries.  An easy day after a long travel sounds good to an old woman like me,” Anamari re-joined, her eyes sparkling just a little.
            “Well, while you ladies wile away your hours,” Tali said pushing back his chair and rising, “I’ve got a crop to harvest.”
            Carmita and Anamari soon had the little house tidy.  They swept the dirt floor, and washed the dishes.
            Then they headed out to the garden, to do some hoeing.  The garden was a good size plot, filled with vegetables, almost ready to harvest.  Some had already ripened, but the majority were sitting quietly, waiting for one or two more days of sun.
            Anamari straightened, “You have a good garden here.  It seems to going well.”
            Carmita agreed, “It proves to be a good year.  Plenty of fresh produce, plenty of grain.  We might even make enough by selling the extras to but a goat, or even a cow.”
            “That would be a real blessing,” Anamari agreed, “Especially with your little one coming soon.
            Carmita rose from where she was kneeling, and brushed the dirt off her knees, “Let’s wash up and go visiting, shall we?  I believe our work here is done.”
            Anamari straightened as well, glancing at the garden, “Appears that way," she agreed, “Let’s go tidy ourselves up.”
            Together they ambled slowly back to the house.  The splashed their arms and faces with water, fried them and gathered their shawls.  A proper Hebrew woman never went out without her shawl, even in the summer months.  However, they had thin cotton ones, meant for modesty and not warmth.
            Tying the shawl over her head, Carmita said, “Come on, let’s go.”
            But they never did actually go.  Tali was soon walking back home, his clothes filthy, and his head hanging.
            “Whatever happened?” Carmita exclaimed, rushing first to the window and then to the door, fear and shock clutching at her heart.
            They knew soon enough.  Tali came through the door, and sank down onto a chair.  Carmita knelt by him, and held his hands in her own.  He flinched and she notices the burns which covered them.
            “Tali, your hands….” She paused, “Oh no! It wasn’t the...the?”
            “…the wheat” he croaked out.  Anamari hurried to fill a water dipper, which he drained thankfully.  Able now to walk, he continued, “The wheat is gone.  Burned to the ground.  There is nothing left.”
            “Oh no!” Carmita clapped her hand to her mouth in horror, “What will we do?  DO we have anything left?”
            Tali shook his head, his eyes filling the tears of strong disappointment and despair.
            Anamari stood back, tears flooding her own eyes, her hands clasped together, saying nothing.
            But Carmita didn’t cry.  She stood, anger filling her soul.  “No!” she screamed, “I won’t allow it!  We need this harvest!  We all do.”  The last sentence was almost a whisper.
            “There is nothing you can do, love,” Tali tried to calm her; “It’s gone.”
            But Carmita pushed away ands stormed outside where she marched up and down in her garden seething with the hurt and the fear of the unknown.
            Anamari made amove to go outside, but Tali raised his head, “Don’t,” he said softly, but with steel in his voice, “When she gets upset, she is likely to bit the head off someone who tries to calm her down.  She will come in when she’s ready.”
            Anamari nodded and sat down.  But inwardly, she was troubled.  She worried about Carmita, firstly because she shouldn’t be marching around in the heat like that, but more importantly, she feared Carmita would hold onto her hurt and let it grow within her into bitterness.  And that was something she knew they didn’t need.  She signed, but Tali took no notice, so she just spoke.
            “You can’t let this make either of you bitter – you need to forgive, forget and move on.”
            Tali’s head shot up at her words, and he just looked at Anamari, “Who is there to forgive?  These things just happen.  It is the disappointment that Carmi is struggling with – not bitterness.”
            Anamari only shrugged.  It was hard to answer, “Maybe.  If she lets the disappointment grow it can.  I think she has been out there long enough – if I were you I’d go out there and talk it through, and bring her back inside.”
            “Then by all means – go.”
            “No Tali,” Anamari’s voice was a forced gentle, “You should go.”
            “I can’t,” he said, sharply, turning his face away, “This is hard for me too, you know.”
            Anamari flinched, stung by the curtness of his words.  She had never known Tali to speak so harshly.  “Of course, I’m sorry Tali,” she said icily, waving her hands to try and convey her real meaning.  When Tali didn’t reply, she backed slowly away into the privacy of her own room.
            Tali hurt when he saw Anamari disappear.  Unlike Carmita, who needed to be alone, he wanted someone to talk ti out and someone he could lean on.  And yet, Anamari had wanted him to be that pillar of strength to Carmita.  He shook his head woodenly, to try and clear it of thoughts.
            Deep down, he knew that Anamari was right, and that he should go and be Carmita’s strength and support.  That he should be the leader of his home, and his household.  But he couldn’t get over his disappointment and hurt enough to be able to present a brave face to her.  His own needs were too great to help another.
            And he had to figure out how to he would feed his family, which was about to expand, for the year.  The garden was going well enough, Tali sighed, as the thought of the garden brought him back to thinking about Carmita, pacing the garden.  He really needed to go to her.
            He glanced over at Anamari’s room, sectioned off from the main room.  Maybe he should go and apologize to her first.  No, he decided, doing what she had said would mean more to her than apologizing.  He got up slowly and crossed the room. Quickly, he jumped backwards as the door swung open.
            Carmita stood, facing him.  He made a brief gesture with his hands, trying to decide what he should say.  But he had no chance.  After half a look at her husband, Carmita brushed past him and entered the house.
            Tali started to open his mouth to say something, but Carmita had turned her back.  He was arrested with doubt.  What should he do??  He didn’t know whether it was better to leave Carmita to her grief or go over and help her.  HE frowned.  His parent had always left each other alone, whether they were grieving or not.  They had set an example of leave and let be, one that was engraved upon Tali’s mind.  However, Anamari seemed to think that it was his duty as head of the house to be strength and support to his wife. What was best?  He didn’t know, so he muttered something about the field and left the house, closing the door with a bang that shook the whole house.
            Carmita heard the bang and jumped.  The tears which didn’t come before now threatened to spill over, but she wouldn’t let them.  If Tali didn’t believe she needed comfort, if he thought that she would be just fine by herself, then she would be, thankyou very much!  She squared her shoulders and lifted her chin, a cold steel entering her eyes.  But beneath her haughty, indifferent air, her hear was breaking.
            She wasn’t crying for the crops, for the lost work and the lost money.  She wasn’t crying for her baby which would now be born into abject poverty.  No, she was crying because Tali didn’t care.  He didn’t check to see if she was okay, he just didn’t.  Carmita slapped the bread on the baking paddle and slammed it into the first, heedless of the sparks that flew out on the dirt floor, glowing for a second, and then fizzling out. 
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            It was that night in which Carmita felt that her baby was coming.  At first, she woke up, restless and uncomfortable, but when she couldn’t go back to sleep, she realized that now was the time.  She hissed, “Tali! Tali!”
            He didn’t stir.  Carmita thought of the evening meal, silent and cold.  She hadn’t spoken, Tali looked tortured and Anamari was troubled.  She hadn’t broken her silence until now, although she’d vowed she’d make Tali pay for his negligence.  But now, with her childbirth upon her, none of that mattered.
            “Tali,” she hissed again, this time kicking him with her foot, “Wake up.”
            Tali moaned and rolled over, “What is it now?”
            “Get up and get Mother,” Carmita orders, “It’s time.”
            “Time for what?” Apparently Tali was still asleep.  Carmita didn’t answer, knowing that he’d realise soon and make a move.
            Sure enough, a minute or so later, Tali suddenly bolted upright in bed.  “You mean, it’s time?” he exclaimed.
            “Yes Tali,” Carmita replied patiently, “It’s time…now.”  She brought a slight edge of urgency into the word now, as another wave of pain swept through her.
            Tali leaped out of bed, “Don’t go anywhere,” he babbled, “I’ll go and get your mother.  Don’t worry; I’ll be back, just stay….” And he was gone across the room, and Carmita soon hear him waking up Anamari. She smiled and closed her eyes.  Everything would be alright, once Anamari was in charge.
            The rest of the day passed in a blur for Carmita.  She remembered closing her eyes, and then remembered the afternoon sun shining in her eyes, and the sharp pain that just kept coming and coming.  She was unaware of the worried looks which passed between Anamari and Tali, when he was allowed to step in the room.  She was unaware of the pacing and fervent hoping Tali was doing in her garden, beating down a path that would remain for years to come.  All she knew was the pain which never let up.
            Finally, just when the sun dipped below the horizon, a baby boy was born.  He was small and fragile, and Anamari hurried to wrap him tightly against the cool breeze now blowing through the window.  She had her back to Carmita, and only spun around when Carmita gave another cry of pain….as a baby girl was also born.  Anamari only just managed to catch the baby without dropping the other.  She balanced the boy on her knees as she repeated the careful wrapping process that she had just completed with her grandson.
            Jubilant, she place both babies in Carmita’s arms and Tali, “Come in Tali! Come and see!”
            Tali came in on the double, and stopped short when he saw Carmita and the babies.
            “Twins,” he breathed in surprise.
            “Yes,” Anamari beamed, “A son and a daughter.”
            Tali moved closes and stroked Carmita’ face with his hand, and then the babies’ faces with the gentle, work-worn tip of one finger. 
            “They are so tiny,” he said in wonder, “so precious.”  Anamari smiled and then quietly left the room to allow them to enjoy the first few moments with their children in private.
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            A horrible screaming awoke Anamari from her sleep.  She sat upright, her heart pounding.  Had she dreamt it?  Or was it real?  She listened for a moment.  Then the scream came again, it sounded like it was coming from the other room.  Carmita!  Anamari leapt out of bed and rushed to where Carmita was holding her infant son.
            “He’s not…..breathing!”  She cried in terror, as Anamari came rushing in.  Tali was standing helpless, nearby, fear paralysing him to the ground.  Anamari reached for the boy and checked his heart, staining to hear a heart-beat, almost imagine she could see the little chest heave up and down with the deep sleep of a newborn.  But there was nothing.
            When Anamari lifted her head, her eyes were full of tears, “I’m so sorry Carmi,” she choked out, “But he’s gone.”
            Carmita reached for her son, holding him tight and her sobs shook her entire body. 
            She sank onto the bed weeping and burrowing her face into the bedding.  Tali stepped outside – being unable to bear the sadness inside the house and inside his heart at once.  In the still night air, the sadness seemed to follow him, and the tears ran freely down his face.  Anamari quietly took the body to her room and prepared it for burial.
            She saw Tali in the main room, just coming back inside.  Anger filled her and she marched out, grabbing him by his arm, “Go to her,” she hissed, her eyes flashing fire, “Don’t you see?  She needs you now, more than ever.  Go!” 
            And she gave him a savage push towards Carmita’s door.  Tali looked bewildered, but stumbled into the bedroom.
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            The morning clear and bright.  IT was going to be another beautiful, hot day.  Anamari awoke from where she’d fallen asleep in the chai, while keeping watch over the little boy.  She saw him now, cold and stiff, and her body as once again wracked with sobs.  Why, she thought, did it have to be now?  Lost stared them in every direction.  They had lost the crop – why did they have to lose the son as well?
            Tali heard her sobbing and came out to meet her.  He placed a hand on her shoulder, but not words came out.  His eyes too, were fixed on the sight of his small son.  Anamari turned when she felt Tali’s touch.  He was fighting for control, his eyes filling in spite of his efforts, and his teeth clenched to try and prevent the downpour.
            “So it’s true,” he managed to say, “I had hoped….”
            “That it was a dream,” Anamari finished.  Tali nodded, his finger gently stroking the face of his son, losing all control.  Anamari stood there quietly, waiting until his sobs had quietened somewhat.  Then she asked, “How is Carmita doing?”
            “Asleep,” Tali replied, “She hasn’t cried, she’s just still as stone.  She won’t look at the girl, either.”
            “Is she alright?”  Anamari asked, her eyes searching Tali’s face, “The baby, I mean.”
            “Yes – Carmi’s caring for her, but only barely.  She wont’ look at her – I think she is hoping that she’ll wake up and find the son she wanted….and had.”  Here Tali let out another deep sob.
            Anamari nodded wearily.  Poor Carmita.  This was so hard on everyone.  She hated to say the next words, but it was necessary. “Tali, you know, we need to bury the boy, now, before it gets too hot.  And before Carmita awakes.”
            Tali nodded, and headed numbly outside, finding a shovel and started to dig the boy’s grave.
            Carmita must have heard the shovel scraping away at the hard dirt, for soon she woke and cried out in anguish.  Anamari hurried and placed a soothing hand on her daughter’s hot forehead, “You’ll be alright,” she tried to comfort her, “don’t hold yourself aloof from the pain and the fact.  It will only make the healing process harder.”
            “I don’t want to heal,” Carmita moaned, “I just want my son back.”
            “I know.  Everyone does.  But we cannot reverse the past, and you need to heal for your daughter’s sake.”
            “I don’t need my daughter,” Carmita sobbed, “But we needed that son.  Tali needed his son – we wanted a boy.”
            “God must have known you needed a girl more at this time in your lives.”
            “God?!?” Carmita exploded angrily, “Don’t mother, just don’t.”
            Anamari opened her mouth to retort, but no words came out.  Just then, the child stirred and wailed.  Carmita turned her head fretfully, “Take her, mother,” she pleaded, “I need to be alone.  Please, take her.”
            Anamari hesitated, and then took the little bundle of Carmita’s arms, “Alright.  You have a rest now Carmi,” she said, “I’ll take care of the baby.”
            But Carmita said nothing.  She had turned her head to the wall, and ignored Anamari altogether.
            Anamari slowly left the room, taking a good look at the little girl in her arms.  She was an adorable little thing.  Her hair was black, and Anamari was sure her eyes would be too.  She looked exactly like Tali, Anamari thought, and yet around her eyes she bore resemblance to Carmita.  The girl stirred and Anamari jiggled her softly, to calm her back into sleep.  The child needed no extra encouragement; it was her only desire at the moment.
            Anamari looked down at the sleeping baby and wished that she, too, could close her eyes, and shut herself away from all the pain and heartache she was experiencing, doubly so because her daughter was hurting too.
            Tali came back in, his face pale but with a calm demeanour.  “The…” he couldn’t bring himself to say the word, “It’s ready.”  He finished hoarsely. 
            Anamari nodded, and handed the girl to her father.  Tali held her gingerly, but carefully and crooned to her under his breath.
            Anamari reached for a wooden crate which she had found earlier, and carefully and sorrowfully lined it with a piece of linen, and placed the child in. 
            Then, suddenly, she was sobbing her heart out, and she just couldn’t go on.  She just couldn’t.  Tali came running when he heard her sudden outburst.  He took in the situation, and without a word, handed the girl to Anamari.  Carefully, he picked up the crate and took it outside.  Anamari collapsed on the bed, holding the one they still had close. 
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            Tali returned several hours later.  He had buried the small crate with his even smaller son in it, and then had found it necessary to go and seek solace before returning to the house.  His young shoulders, broad and strong as they were, were not used to carrying such loads of sorrow and leaderships.  To become head of the house was taking its toll on Tali.  He had no strength left.  Before the disaster of the crop and the tragedy of their son, there had been no real need for a strong leader, a head of the home.  He and Carmita had had no real problems, and the small every-day grievances and issues that came up were easily settled and put to rest again.  But now, Carmita really needed him to be there, needed him to be strong in her weakness.  Tali was struggling to be all the Anamari demanded on him – his own grief was too great to bear.
            He entered the house to find it silent and still.  Despite the situation and his deep pain, Tali’s stomach rumbled.  It had been a long time since he had had anything to eat.  He put a hand on his stomach, trying to silence it.
            But now that food had crossed his mind, he realised how hungry he was.  And he thought about Carmita and Anamari.  The also had had nothing to eat.  He looked around the kitchen, trying to locate some food.  But there was none.  Carmita had been making her bread daily, Tali knew, and it appeared that they were out of stew.
            Tali looked hopelessly at the barrel which was half full of flour and the small jar of oil which sat next to the fireplace.  He had no idea how to cook, but he knew someone who did.  His hands dipped into the flour and scooped out several cups.  Carefully, he bundled the flour into a bowl, and headed outside again with it and the oil jar in his hands. 
            Tali walked down the street, heading towards their nearest neighbour’s house.  Tali and Carmita’s house stood a little part away from the town, making their nearest neighbour a good five minute’s walk away. 
            Tali felt uncomfortable about going to his particular neighbour.  He didn’t know her very well. She was a widow, so he hadn’t worked with her husband in the field. However, Carmita had often remarked how kind she was, and appeared to have a good friendship with her.  So Tali went to her home.  He knocked, and before long, the door was opened.
            The woman was an old lady now, her hair was purled back into a tight knot ,her hands rough from many years of hard work, “What can I do for you, young man?” she asked kindly.
            Tali cleared his throat and tried to speak without crying, “My name…name is Tali.  I’m Carmita’s husband,” he paused, waiting to see the gleam of recognition in the woman’s eye before continuing, “Carmita had her babies yesterday.”
            “Babies? You mean there are twins?”
            “Yes….but, but the boy didn’t live,” Tali paused again, swallowing hard.
            “Oh I am so sorry,” and her sorrowful eyes conveyed the depth of her feeling.
            “And…” Tali stumbled on, “Carmita and her mother are taking it pretty hard and…and I can’t cook.  So I was hoping you could bake em something to take up to them.  I can pay you,” and he held up the bowl full of flour.
            The woman stepped forward, “Certainly I can,” she soothed, “You look all done in yourself.  Come and sit and rest awhile while I bake.”
            Tali accepted her offer gratefully and entered the cool house.  The inside of the cottage was poorer than their house, and the fire was flickering weakly.  The widow poled at the fire, bringing the flames up high again.  She took the flour Tali and brought her and began to make a simple dough.  For awhile there was silence, then she spoke.
            “How are you going?”
            Tali looked up at her, surprise in his eyes, “I’m alright.  Carmita is….”
            But she interrupted him, “I’m asking how you are.  I remember when my child died.  Everyone was concerned about my health and well-being, my mother’s health and her well-being, my other children.  But no-one stopped to ask how the father was.  He was just expected to lead, to guide, to comfort without a thought for his own grief.  But gas time passed on, he took longer to heal, because he had had to sort out himself by himself.  No support whatsoever.”
            Tali’s eyes filled at her words, “That’s exactly how I’m feeling.  Anamari is pushing me to be there for Carmita, but I feel I just can’t.”
            “You have to be there for her.  That is the role of the head of the house.  But you don’t have to be strong.  Carmita most likely doesn’t’ want someone who is going to ease her out of pain, trying to smooth it over.  But she will want someone to share it, someone who will walk with her every step of the way, to cry when she cries, to mourn when she mourns and to remember together.  Being there for her is so much more than just being the strong, noble head of the home.  And when you do that, Tali, you will find that she will be there for you as well.  Now, your bread is finished.”
            Tali had being leaning forward, drinking in every word of the widow’s wise speech.  Now he leaned back and said softly, “Thankyou so much.  You don’t know how much I needed that.”  His eyes filled again, and the widow patted his hand.
            “It will get easier, I assure you,” she said.
            Tali rose to take his leave.  He bundled up the pieces of hot bread, “Thankyou for this,” he said in a matter-of-fact voice, trying to keep it together, “You can keep the rest of the flour.”
            “The widow bowed her head in acknowledgement and thanks, and Tali stepped out into the street.
            Briskly, he walked back home, careful not to break the bread he was   holding.  As he entered his own house, everything was just as he had left it.  Anamari was in her room, and Carmita apparently was still asleep.  He ladled a dipperful of water into a cup and headed towards Carmita’s bedroom.
            Slowly, he entered, his eyes taking in the prone figure of his wife.  The room was dark, but as his eyes adjusted, he saw there was no baby with her.  Quickly, trying to ignore that panic growing in his heart, Tali stepped back out and into Anamari’s room.  There, he saw his girl asleep on the bed.  Anamari had her back to the entrance and never saw nor heard Tali’s quick entering and exiting.
            Once his fear and pounding heart had subsided, Tali returned to Carmita.  He placed one gentle hand on her shoulder, as her face was turned away from the world.
            He sat down on the edge of the bed.  Tali tried to speak, but no words come out.  Instead, only sobs and tears explained his grief.
            Carmita felt rather than heart Tali enter the room.  She smelt the fresh bread, but her stomach was clenched up hard.  She could eat nothing.  She felt his hand upon her shoulder, felt the bed say as he sat down and then…..nothing.  Ger ears automatically stained to catch the words she knew she’d hear, “There, there.  You’ll get over it, it will get easier.  Try to get out of bed – you’ll feel better for it.”  But there was nothing.  In the silence, the sounds of one crying filled her ears.  Carmita froze in surprise.  She hadn’t expected Tali to be crying along with her.  In fact, she hadn’t expected Tali to cry at all.  Without turning her head, or looking at her husband, Carmita slipped her little hand into his big one, and left it there.
            Tali squeezed her hand tightly – the tears still rolling down his cheeks.  He said nothing.
            They stayed like that for a very long time.  They weren’t conscience of time passing, they weren’t trying to comfort each other with words; they were simply working through their grief, silently, separately, but together.
            Tali rose to go when he heard Anamari calling him.  He patter Carmita’s shoulder one more time, and left the plant of food next to the bed.  Then, as silently as he had come, he left.
            Anamari was holding the baby girl, now and trying to keep her settled.  “She needs to be fed,” she worried aloud to Tali, “But how will we keep her alive if Carmita won’t?”
            Tali took the fussing baby without a word and re-entered Carmita’s bedroom. 
            “Carmi,” he said tentatively, hoping not to undo all the time they’d just spent together, “She needs to be fed, Anamari said, will you, please?”
            To his great relief, Carmita slowly rolled over and held her arms out to take the baby.
            She held her softly, almost tenderly.  Then she spoke for the first time to him since screaming out the pain of their son’s death.
            “Why do we have this girl? Instead of the boy that we wanted so badly?”
            Tali sighed, his shoulders sagging, “I don’t know Carmita,” he replied, “But what I do know is that I don’t want this girl to die too.  I couldn’t bear it if both our children passed on.  So please, take care of her Carmi.  Don’t allow you grief to take over and take the life of this on as well.”
            Carmita opened her mouth, then closed it, then opened it again and retorted, “Are you saying I caused the death of our boy?”
            Tali hastily made a negative gesture with his hands, “No, of course not.  Some are destined to live, other do not have the breath o f life in them.  It was no one’s fault.”
            Carmita sighed deeply, before she replied, her voice soft, “I can’t help but feel it is my fault.  I should have done something more….”
            “There only thing you can do now,” Tali gently admonished, “Is to care for our little one here.  She still needs you.”  Then he turned and left the room.  Despite his pain, he was glad that Carmita had spoken so readily.  And doubly thankful that she was now caring for the child.
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            In time, Carmita again rose to her daily duties as housewife.  Her recovery from the birthing was longer than usual, but neither Tali nor Anamari felt inclined to push her.
            On the eighth day, Anamari ventured, “Do you have a name for your child?  She is eight days old, you know.”
            Tali looked to Carmita.  She was going to do the choosing.
            “Yes,” she replied rather shortly, “I named her Mary, for the sight of her still sends bitter memories of the son I lost.”      
            “Oh Carmita,” Anamari pleaded, “Don’t do that.  Listen, for I will tell you something that I have never before told anyone.  My family had been through a really rough tome when my mother was born.  So they named her Anamari which also means bitter.  Then as I was born, the Romans had just taken over, and I received the name bitter because of the devesting circumstances around me.  But when you were born, Carmita, you were born into a year of drought.  We were struggling for food, and another mouth to feed, especially a girl, was not a welcome sight in many eyes.  But I loved you, and named you Carmita, meaning song.  I wanted to break the chains of bitterness and thank God for our blessings.  You were a song, and a joy everyday you were under my roof, Carmita.  And I’ve never regretted you or your name once.  Please, think about it.  Your daughter will become a source of joy to you – naming her thus would only increase your pain.”
            Carmita hardened her resolve, “No Mother.  My mind is quite well made up.  Bitter she has made me, and bitter he name shall remain.  So accept her as she is, Mother.  Your granddaughter – Mary.”
            Anamari sat back in her chair stunned.  She felt like she had just been slapped in the face.  Tears gathered, but she refused to let them fall.  Showing Carmita she had been hurt, Anamari sensed, would only make the problem worse.
‘           Tali also sat still and silent.  He had given Carmita a choice in the naming, so he wasn’t going to back out now, but he didn’t want strife in his household.
            Carmita looked from Tali to Anamari, from Anamari to Tali.  She saw their still faces, the traces of disbelief and pain on Anamari’s, the stunned and shock on Tali’s.  Carmita exploded in frustration, “Well, what are you all looking like that for! Disappointed in me, I suppose.”  She turned and fled to the bedroom, slamming the door behind her.
            Mary started to cry, and Anamari picked her up, crooning automatically to her to calm her down.
            Tali eventually whispered, so Carmita would not hear, “What do I do now?”
            Anamari sighed deeply, “I don’t know Tali.  I don’t know.”
            Tali worked his hands together in frustration, “She’s just changed so much, Anamari.  I don’t know what to do, how to help her.  But she isn’t the woman I know and love.”
            “Yes she is,” Anamari returned, “You married her for better or worse.  This is about the worst you can get.  You have hit the bottom of your reserves.  But tell me this, Tali, what is at the bottom of yourself and your marriage?  Do you hit rock or is there an endless void, nothing solid at all?”
            Tali opened his mouth to answer.  And then he closed it again.  He didn’t know what to say.  Finally, he mumbled, “I don’t know.”
            Anamari patted him on the shoulder.  “It is easy to forget to build a strong foundation when life is going easy.  But in tough times, that’s not the time to start.”
            “But how?” Tali queried, “How do I build it strong?”
            “You have to spend time with Carmita.  I know you are both in the same house, but you really need to spend time with her.  Talk about deep issues; discuss where you are going as a family.  And also draw nearer to God.  How many times have you been to the temple lately?”
            Tali didn’t reply at first.  When he did, he spoke almost defensively, “We’ve kept all the rules.  We don’t break them intentionally.  And I never had any extra stock to sacrifice.”
            Anamari didn’t say anything.  It had always been a touchy subject with Tali – talking about God, and the last thing they needed was him to get mad, and a rift to form between them.  Instead, she rose from the table and began to clear the dishes off.  Mary had stopped whimpering, and now was laying on a grass-mat near the table. 
            Tali sat, watching her quietly.  Then he asked again, “What do I do now?”
            Anamari sighed, but only quietly so Tali didn’t hear her.  “Draw from experience, Tali,” she said, “What have you done in the past?  What did you see your parents doing?  You have to take the initiative and think for yourself.”
            “I don’t have much of an experience o lean on,” Tali said helplessly, “my parents weren’t really on the best of speaking terms.”
            “When?”
            “When I was about twelve, I think,” Tali answered, speaking with some hesitation, “that’s when I remember it, anyway.”
            “And can you remember anything significant happening before then?” Anamari pressed her brain ticking.  This just might be the link which Tali needed to see the point which she was trying to make.
            Tali went to answer, but a pained look spread across his face.  His features went white, and he sat weakly down at the table, head in his hands.
            “Well?” Anamari insisted.
            “When…when I was eleven,” Tali began in a broken voice, “My elder brother died in an attempt to route the Romans out.”
            Anamari kept her features totally calm, not letting her feelings spill out.  She said quietly, “A beloved son?”
            Tali nodded mutely, “A favourite of my mother.  In fact, he was the only one she had left from her first marriage.”     
            “And your father?  Did he love this son?”
            “As his own.  But my mother idolized him, and blamed my father for letting him go to war.”
            “And the rift was never healed,” Anamari finished softly, “Think upon it, Tali.”
            Tali didn’t move, nor did he reply.  Anamari distinctly felt she had pushed the issue far enough and she needed to leave him alone, to think.  She finished the dishes, picked up Mary and headed to the refuge of her bedroom – while Tali wrestled out his hurt.  No wonder he couldn’t help Carmita, Anamari thought, he has issues he needs to deal with first, and perhaps even forgive his parents.  I would never have picked that Tali, too, was struggling with bitterness.
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            That supper meal was a strange, silent, awkward meal.  Everyone made it to the table, including Carmita which surprised Anamari greatly. 
            Tali didn’t look at anyone, merely ate his food, glancing neither right nor left.
Anamari tried to make light conversation, but the words were stuck in her throat.  One look of Carmita’s still face, and Tali’s stone one was enough to freeze any attempt at conversation.
            Mary fussed, and Carmita picked her up, silently settled her on her lap.  The sound of that one cry echoed over and over through that quiet room.
            As soon as they were finished eating, Carmita rose and closed herself back into the bedroom.  Tali also rose and headed outside.
            Anamari alone with the dishes began to clear up, inwardly praying, “Oh God, what am I to do now?  It appears to be a stalemate, and I’m due to go home at the end of the week, but I can’t leave it like this.”
            Her answer came, but not in an audible voice, not even in a voice which spoke to her quietly – but instead in waves pf peace which flooded over her soul.  And in her heart, Anamari knew her answer, “Wait.”
            She quickly cleaned up and exited to her room as quietly as possible.  She wanted to be out of the way for when Tali came back.  She wanted to leave them alone, whether to laugh or to cry, to scream or to whisper, they needed the privacy of solitude to work things out.
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            Anamari heard nothing.  She waited, clinging to the word which echoed in her mind – ‘wait.’  Eventually, as the night grew dark and the stars twinkled, she fell asleep.
            She awoke next morning, a sense of despair about her.  She had waited, but nothing had happened.  Now what was she going to say to make this broken family begin to heal?  Then that ever-growing sense of peace filled her and she knew she was being impatient.  “Wait,” she murmured to herself. Abraham and Sarah waited nearly one hundred years; Moses waited forty years, their forefathers four-hundred years before they were delivered from the Egyptians’ hands.  And she wasn’t willing to wait a night!  She almost had to laugh – but the situation was too near her heart for that.
            Quietly, she stepped outside.  The birds were singing and the wind blew softly.  Anamari looked at the garden.  It was overflowing with ripe vegetables, ready for the harvest.  She would begin today; hopefully Carmita would be alright without her in the house.
            Hurrying back inside, Anamari found that Tali and Carmita were now up, Carmita setting breakfast on the table, Tali holding their daughter.  He looked up and smiled, albeit a little shakily, at Anamari, “Good morning,” he said.  Anamari nodded in reply.  Careful not to look at Carmita so as not to direct her words that way, she said, “The garden is looing ripe and ready.  Thought I might start harvesting today, if that is okay with you.” 
            Tali began to answer, but his reply was cut short by Carmita’s sharp retort. “No, I can do it.”
            Anamari opened her mouth and closed it again, opening it again only to take another mouthful of breakfast.  She swallowed and then tried again, “Well, is there anything else I can help you with today?”
            “No,” came the curt rejoinder.  Carmita’s words rang in the silence, and Tali shifted uncomfortably in his seat.  He spoke quietly, but firmly.
            “Carmita let your mother help.”  Carmita said nothing, but turned a scornful look on him.  But before she could speak, Tali repeated “Let her help.” Carmita didn’t respond, but then Mary began to cry, and so she turned her attention to the baby, reaching down to pick her up.
            “Fine,” she muttered, “Mother can do it all.”  Anamari turned a pained look onto Tali, who once again slipped into slice.  The only sounded as the tapping of Carmita’s feet as she rocked Mary back to sleep.  Anamari rose from the table and headed outside to begin work.  The trees were alive with birds, rejoicing in the early day, the light filtering through the branches.  Anamari sighted heavily as she deftly started the harvest.  Tear trickled down her face as she worked, eventually making gutters in the dirt that appeared on her cheeks as the day wore on.
            As night fell, Anamari rose and went indoors.  She reached for the water and soap, cleaning a day’s work off her face.  Then she silently sat down at the table and began to eat the dinner which Carmita had prepared.  The silence was again deafening, and neither Anamari nor Tali looked up.  Hence, no-one saw the steady stream of tears which fell down Carmita’s face.   They dropped into her stew, but no-one noticed.   Carmita’s food was untouched and her head in her hands, then, as her grief grew unbearable, she let out a sob.  Tali’s head snapped up at the sound.
            He made a move towards her, but then stopped, not knowing if to go ahead.  Anamari urged him on with a fierce mouthing of the words, “Be strong.”  Then she picked up Mary and headed to her bedroom, closing the door behind her.
            Still, Tali hesitated.  He thought over the words which the widow had said, “You don’t need to be strong – you only need to be there.  You need her as much as she needs you.”  Tali made no move; he just stood there, the tears running down his own face.  He was surprised, a few moments later, to feel a small hand in his.  Carmita had looked up at the sound of her husband crying and a love, stronger than the grief which had overcome her, washed through her heart.  Poor Tali, he had been through so much, first the crops, and then their son, and now she had turned her back.  Carmita whispered softly, “Oh, I am so sorry, Tali.  I have not been right.”
            Tali looked up, his eyes wide as the impact of her words hit him, “You?” he repeated, “No Carmi, it is all my fault.  Don’t you see?  I have failed to be the leader, failed at being your strength and rock you need.  I couldn’t even o to you when you needed me most I….” and his words trailed off, his voice becoming too broken with tears to continue.
            Carmita said nothing, but only held both his hands in her.  After a long pause, she said softly, as much to herself as to Tali, “We have both failed.  We both haven’t been who we should have been.  But it is not too late to begin again, is it?”
            Tali raised his head, “No Carmi, I guess not.  But this time, I am going to do it right.”
            “No, Tali,” Carmita corrected, “We are going to do it right.”
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            The next day, Carmita and Tali set off on their journey together. They walked many miles and stayed many nights before reaching their destinations – Jerusalem.  They waited in queue for a long time before finally seeing the high priest at the temple gates.  They were ushered in and together, they knelt at the altar, giving their offering of grains.  The priest noticed them and gestured for them to come close.
            “Why are you here?” he asked kindly.
            “My name is Tali,” Tali replied, “and this is my wife.  We have come to start afresh our lives with God and with each other.”  The priest nodded and gently took Mary from Carmita’ arms, “This little one will bring great blessing,” he prophesied, “She will be used by the Lord.”    
            Tali tightened his grip on Carmita’s hand, “She already has.”
            “Not just to you,” the priest responded, handing the baby back, “But to all of Israel.”  Then he ushered them onwards, attending to the next who stood behind them.
            Tali and Carmita moved slowly away.  Tali stoked Mary’s face as she lay in Carmita’s arms, “Whatever could that mean?” he wondered aloud.
            Carmita didn’t reply immediately, but held Mary closer, “I’m sure we will know….one day.”
            Tali nodded his agreement, “When the time is right.”



            

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